Nighttime blabbering 573

How to get a reader interested in the plot of the novel?

A snippet from my 6th novel

The world of heroes meets modern age.

Pieces of Hell – Black Lada 1500 Special (story and critique)

Beware of black Lada 1500 Special.

Pieces of Hell – Black Lada 1500 Special (Out now)

Here it is, the third part you all have been waiting for. It's a horror story, something I haven't really tried myself before to write. There is a lot of paranormal activity, symbolism, and spooky motives. Vasily is a normal veteran from the Second World War, driving a black Lada, trying to survive. Ludmila is …

Black Lada 1500 (announcement)

This is a third part of the "Pieces of Hell" saga. Long road leads to a destination of no return. Tires hum speeding while nature outside grows darker, so dark, there is no escape from what is coming. Would you enter inside the black Lada 1500 Special, if that would've meant that everyone you love …

Pieces of Hell – The Bunker (story & critique)

The story A long slip on a concrete wall casted rays of light over furniture. The rest of the walls were made of porous dirt, roughly shaped with a shovel. Maps, a few steel cups and a teapot for five servings were on a simple wooden table in the middle of the room. A folding …

Pieces of Hell – The Bunker (story and critique)

Get involved in a World war 2 drama. Get to know British officers facing a tremendous problem. What is more important than incoming battles, the safety of men, and a chain of command. One letter will change their world, flip it upside down, spin their heads, and bring the whole advancing lines to a halt. …

Domes of Whirland (snippet)

My family abandoned me, left their child here on the mountain, with an old man to spend its days. That man accepted me and took me inside his hut full of bones sticking out the walls and roof, which resembled a hedgehog's back. Ancient tusks, carved with symbols, fractured to a full length gave a …

Captain of the Silver Feather

Flames outlined their shape on the armor as they stepped out of the darkness. "This is the ninth village, Captain. The Ashgadis have outsmarted us again, ”Nanur said plainly, turning to the Captain behind the line of horsemen. "It was as if their horses had been given wings and rushed to burn the legacy of Kord …

Collision (story and critique)

Dead of night, Lily woke up coughing and got up. She went to the bathroom hissing about the headache. Her vision resembled a light moving too fast, like an inferno rising around her. Pain in her head must have been a side effect of the treatments. The bathroom switch clicked, but Lily only saw darkness. …