Collision (story and critique)

Dead of night, Lily woke up coughing and got up. She went to the bathroom hissing about the headache. Her vision resembled a light moving too fast, like an inferno rising around her. Pain in her head must have been a side effect of the treatments. The bathroom switch clicked, but Lily only saw darkness. … Continue reading Collision (story and critique)

Nighttime blabbering 365

Update on the story I was editing. I managed to complete the editing, altered the end and made it much better. Sadly, my story is exciding the requirements, so my editor and I need to shorten the short story. There is a limit on how many signs and blank spaces a writer can use to … Continue reading Nighttime blabbering 365