Collision (story and critique)

Dead of night, Lily woke up coughing and got up. She went to the bathroom hissing about the headache. Her vision resembled a light moving too fast, like an inferno rising around her. Pain in her head must have been a side effect of the treatments. The bathroom switch clicked, but Lily only saw darkness. … Continue reading Collision (story and critique)

Nighttime blabbering 356 – Halloween and Anniversary

Congratulations to me and this little blog for achieving the anniversary of talking nonsense. It has been a year. For this occasion, I intended to make a special post. I wanted to write something you would like to read and perhaps learn a thing or two. I asked what you would like and Commander Viola … Continue reading Nighttime blabbering 356 – Halloween and Anniversary

Time travel paradox (story and critique)

Time travel paradox Story by Shawn   „Protective gloves, check. Vortex proximity drive holding at 3.45 degrees dilation, check. Mars bar, check, and check.“, Jib counted his essentials. „Seriously? You are wearing a plastic wrap for clothing, about to travel million years after the dinosaur got extinct, set up a command post for the incoming … Continue reading Time travel paradox (story and critique)